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Cohesiveness in Expository Writing by Saudi EFL Students

Hani, E. Alamri

The University of Tabuk,

Faculty of Arts and Education,

Department of Languages and Translation,

Saudi Arabia

ABSTRACT

This study examined cohesive connectivity in expository writing by language and

translation students at University of Tabuk in Saudi Arabia. Halliday and Hasan’s

(1976) list of cohesive devices was used to examine the cohesion of expository texts

of language and translation students. The study examined the cohesive devices’

quality and their contribution to the quality of writing. This mixed-mode research

included 34 participants. 30 undergraduates participated in the expository writing

assignment and 4 EFL teachers participated in the semi-structured interview.

Students were chosen using purposive sampling. Expository written texts were the

tool deployed to gather data from participants. Findings revealedthat learners faced

text unity difficulties in attaining written texts’ cohesiveness, mainly in allocating

their ideas and employing correct markers, punctuation, and spelling problems.

Expository texts were examined for cohesionadditives,adversatives,andcausal and

temporal devices. Results of the study showed that the existence and unnecessary

occurrence of lexical items cause non-cohesive writing and influence its texts’

quality, meaning, structure, and unity.The researcher recommends as related to the

results of the study that cohesion devices be incorporated into the teaching of

writing.

Keywords: expository writing; coherence; cohesion; EFL; text

INTRODUCTION

Cohesion is coherence defined uniquely in writing research (Bui, 2022). They are the most

deceptive textual standards. Unity signifies style where surface structural constituents of a

writing show unity (Al Khotaba, 2022). Coherence shows how the unity of meaning is upheld.

A text generates meaning since there is a logic of connection inthe acceptance originated by text

terms (Halliday and Hasan, 1976).

Cohesion and coherence are dependable since the proper practice of cohesion markers will

help, in attaining consistency, which is continued by the frequent text boundary displayed data

with a better understanding of the text (Pavavijarn, 2022). Coherence discusses howa text

achieves unity expressively and shows that the preservation of text is interior, but attained by

implication. Unity is very important in varied areas of discourse, where explicit writings may

be inappropriate and do not comprise several lexical items. If text is disjointed and inadequate,

this may be due to register boundaries such as the concentration of words existing in English.

For example, the regular use of non-finite types of verbs involving ellipsis, and if inconsistent,

to certain degree, particular inappropriateness by the author (Munday, 2016).

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Yet, written texts may still be rational by relying on essayists’ knowledge and abilities to attain

knowledgeable implications (Bui et al., 2021). From an expository viewpoint such texts are

motivating, because they require a stranded consideration from the writer’s stance, who may

wish to relate to an expert, dedicated to the field of experimental research. Such process is

conducted to achieve desirable implications as a connecting meaning to support writers using

foreign language-restricted unity to review text cohesiveness (Cronin, 2020). The implicationof

cohesion in a translational setting has been described by many researchers from different

standpoints (Folaron, 2020). In related research based on a suitable differentiation of writing

from interrelated uses of text construction, it could be suggested that unity related to the

regular theoretical devices including surface text mightremain reliable in expository writing

(Nunes, 2020). How unity is embodied in text, for example, practice of cohesive ties may vary

due to different related reasons,for instance, to be specific text. Coherence in the present

research is implemented to represent the proposed meaning (Musacchio, 2019) since meaning

describes the viewpoint of language expressions for reproducing virtual knowledge, whilst

meaning enables data that is shifted by lexis taking place in writings (Al Khotaba, 2022).

Researchers indicate that several words possess virtual meanings, but within common

situations, only a single connotation shows in writings. Such aspect possesses continuous

implications for expository writing since writers do not write unapproachable words, but

expressions in texts that requirethem to limit the proposed connotation of a particular word in

definite text. This is important in situations where text-surface may keep it difficult to generate

the proposed connotation (Zaretskaya, 2019). It is this proposed meaning that should be

reserved in expository writing, by implementing cohesive ties, which this research provides,

may differ between languages. The appropriate use of EFL cohesive device helps convey the

proposed sense via communication between textual and writer’s knowledge, previous

knowledge, and word knowledge. Expository text unity is piloted in this study within real basis

of correspondence important exploration related to hypothetically well-organized expository

texts and refined writing (Halliday and Hasan, 1976). Structures of cohesion may function at

lexical, grammatical, semantic heights (Läubli, et al. 2020), further systematic studies are

required to analyze cohesion as a unique feature of expository writing. This shows how

correspondence connects function and categorizes patterns in expository writing descriptions

that may be used in applied separations in the field. This study proposed that at expository

textual level and unity are reproduced to be methodically connected, which means that unity is

inspected by seeing fundamental consistency (Scott, 2018), a stage that is core to attain

unchanging relevant findings.

LITERATURE REVIEW

Many studies have been carried out to analyze the importance of cohesion and coherence in

writing consistency, mainly in expository essays (Qin & Liu, 2021). Othman (2019) studied

grammatical cohesive device errors made by Saudi EFL students in written paragraphs at the

University of Tabuk.

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His findings revealed that the most common mistakes occurred in conjunction with the

percentage of (52%), reference (37%), and substitution (11%). The results demonstrated that

Saudi students committed such mistakes due to a lack of grammar, the influence of mother

tongue interference, a lack of language skills, and a lack of vocabulary. Wahid & Wahid (2020)

studied three types of compositions of EFL learners. The research used Hasan-Halliday's (1976)

framework of cohesion analysis. They observed that learners experienced both overuse and

misuse of cohesive ties that appeared in weak text consistency.

Yang, et al. (2007) examined Chinese students and stakes expository writing. The researcher

used Systemic Functional Linguistics (SFL) framework. This study investigated two aspects of

the theme in the textual metafunction theme markedness and theme progression. These

components are further explored through a parallel analysis of an expository essay written by

a North American freshman. This proportional theme analysis showed expanses in pedagogy

that should be related to if EFL learners are to develop more effective control over significant

structures of expository writing. Pham et al., (2021) explored a genre-based approach to

writing in EFL contexts. This study was conducted at Van Lang University. 128 students turned

in their midterm essays in week 5 of the 10-week writing course. The data were analyzed using

Microsoft Excel to calculate the differences in move-step structure. The results showed that the

students had problems following the fixed move-step structure, and they also faced challenges

with lexico-grammatical usage for the expository.

Amayreh and Bin Abdullah (2022) studied conjunction in expository essay writing by Jordanian

undergraduate students studying English as a Foreign Language (EFL). A corpus of 30

expository essays was collected by using a simple purposive sampling technique to answer the

questions of the study based on the theory of cohesion analysis by refining the grammatical

cohesive related aspect based on Halliday and Hasan’s (1976) taxonomy of conjunction. The

results show that additive conjunction covers the largest proportion (57.70%) followed by

causal conjunction (6.44%), adversative conjunction (3.64%), and temporal conjunction

(3.64%). On the other hand, the analysis reveals that students use additive conjunction

(17.93%), causal conjunction (5.32%), adversative conjunction (3.36%), and temporal

conjunction (1.96%) inappropriately. Bilal (2021) examined the potential writing errors

created by 3rd and 4thEFL learners atShaqra University in Saudi Arabia. Conclusions showed that

learners created errors in their writing. These errors included punctuation and grammatical

errors. It suggested thatthose students should be given adequate training in writing so that they

can properly create unified structures. Having revised these researches, the researcher

considers that there is a necessity to investigate cohesion in expository compositions at

University of Tabuk in KSA as it has not been surveyed previously.

Study Problem

This research is concerned with examining unity in expository essays, mainly structural

problems that EFL learners encounter when attempting to produce expository writings. Many

EFL students have problems producing unified written text. They lack skills to produce

incoherent texts. In an investigation conducted on learners’ expository writing skills,

conclusions observed that they generally face difficulties connected to ideas’ organization

structure related to expository writing (Al-Harbi & Troudi, 2020; Algryani, 2020).

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Objectives of Study

Few research studies were conducted on cohesion in expository writing at the university level.

The importance of this study is to assist undergraduates in producing cohesive expository

writing and developing their writing skills. It proposes to explore learners’ text unity difficulties

in EFL essays. The researcher aims to test consistency in expository writing by language and

translation students at the University level. Based on this, this study addresses the following

questions:

1. What are the types of cohesive devices used by Saudi undergraduates in expository

writing?

2. How do EFL students perceive the Use of Cohesive Devices inexpository writing?

RESEARCH METHODS

This study adopted a mixed-mode design that is considered one of the best types of studies

(Creswell, 2012). This framework contains a “procedure of first gathering qualitative data to

explore a phenomenon, and then collecting quantitative data to explain relationships found in

the qualitative data” (Creswell, 2012, p. 552). The researcher used two research tools including

a written essay and a semi-structured interview. The researcher used a rubric for assessing

expository compositions to carry out the study method inflexibly. The rubric included a lot of

criteria in to test cohesion concentration in expository writing. These measures are connected

to measuring the core thought, organizational markers, spelling, supporting information, and

punctuation. Researcher collected data from participants using two research instruments, a

written text, and interviews.

Participants chosen for investigation were 3rd Year EFL students studying languages and

translation at the Department of Languages and Translation at the University of Tabuk in Saudi

Arabia. The study was conducted in the second semester of the scholastic year 2021/2022. The

study sample contained 30 undergraduates and 4 expository writing teachers who participated

in the semi-structured interview. Contributors to this analysis, only males, were distributed

into experimental and control groups.

RESULTS

This section of the study discusses the results and analysis of the data.

The Types and Frequency of the Use of Cohesive Devices

The results showed that learners implemented four types of cohesive devices comprised

additive, adversative, causal, and temporal. Occurrence of devices that learners apply. Table.1

in displays the overall frequencies and use of cohesive devices in students’ expository essays.

As depicted in Table.1, the experimental group included 15 participants. The number of

cohesive devices used by the experimental group was recorded at 1257 (55.5%), which overdid

the use of cohesive devices by the control group recorded at 1125 (46.3%). This shows an

improvement in the student's quality of writing after achieving the necessary knowledge

concerning the proper and correct use of cohesive devices in expository writing.

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Table 1: The Overall Frequencies and Use of Cohesive Devices

Data Participants Total

Cohesive

Devices

Frequency of the

Overall Use of

Cohesive Devices

in the Text

Experimental

Group

15 1257 55.5%

Control

Group

15 1126 46.3%

In addition, Table.1 displays that sum of connectors established in writings was 2,383. Findings

revealed that EFL students misuse devices in their essays with a lack of necessary knowledge.

The number of devices employed by EFL students comprised four categories, mainly, causal,

adversatives, and temporal, additives. Analysis showed that both students’ groups

(Experimental & control) applied four categories of connectors. Implementation of these links

happens amongst learners as a result of lack of awareness of unity conjunctions. This exposes

that there is well-informed progress in applying cohesive ties in expository compositions.

Results display that learners’ practice of markers is viewed in varied categories that show

significant differences.

The analysis shows that the number of additives revealed in writings was 1583 occurrences,

followed by adversatives reporting 349 occurrences, whilst the causal made about 270

occurrences, then followed by temporal and other kinds of markers reporting 181 occurrences,

creating a total of 2,383 throughout the 30 compositions. Though, the occurrenceof additives in

the compositions (65.1%), adversatives (15%), and causal(13%), whilst temporal represented

the least percentage (6%).

Comparable findings revealed in studies such as Al Shamalatm & Ghani (2020), exposed that

Jordanian learners employed diverse kinds of devices, which influenced both writings unity and

quality. The investigators accept that the potential cause behind the difference in practice of

devices by Saudi EFL students might relay tothe interlanguage interventions and learners’

reading practice. Curriculum themes and instructional approaches (traditional) might be a

potential basis for learners’ lack of proficiency to apply organizational markers skillfully.

Othman (2019) found outthat Saudi undergraduates committed these kinds of errors due to a

lack of inadequate grammatical knowledge of these devices, the influence of mother tongue

interference, lack of vocabulary, and language background. Findings presented that learners

’written essays were not real because they lack use of connectors in composing. Inference

shows use of a great number of connectors in text relates to reading materials. It is worth

asserting that information gathered mainly via gathering expository texts. Keeping in mind

such view, only one category (temporal) out of all was the least noted in compositions, though,

largely expository writing was used to establish the analysis. It is very remarkable to clarify

this existence, but it may be related to writing development in the analysis since some

connectors are genre-specific which might be a reason why connectors did not act fully. For

example, markers including “and, also, because, so, but, or” are used in verbal interaction

connected to non-verbal interaction. In addition, the inappropriate size of participants may be

another reason.

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The amount of lexical markers varies based on the genre of writing, which ranges from 180-

1580 incidences in the elicited data. This shows that implementing conjunctions associated with

producing technique and author’s style. Additionally, native language intersection may be an

extra reason for such use. Presence and absence of definite conjunctions in students’ native

language might cause an overuse of conjunctions. This may influence textual unity. Earlier

surveys reveal different reasons that lie behind text disunity (Amayreh and Abdullah, 2021),

which suggested that occurrences of devices differ according to learners’ language experience.

A potential explanation of such presence might be developed occurrence replicating efforts that

EFL learners showed for attaining unity in their expository writings through using different

devices. This shows that EFL learners rely on related linguistic conjunctions besides applying

conjunctions to attain cohesiveness. Furthermore, when overuse of conjunctions is general in

compositions, it is possiblethat is instructional motivation. Findings go in line with previous

research results (Zhang, 2018), which demonstrate that overuse of conjunctions has been

established because of learners’ linguistic experiences. Though, results appear in harmony with

previous research. Thus, it is important to reveal that some earlier investigations comprised an

insufficient amount of conjunctions in contrast to current research in extent and goals.

Additionally, the change in investigation practice of studies might also display some of the

inconsistencies comprised in this concern (Al Khotaba, 2022). Stages of students’ knowledge

use, instructional methods, and native language changes are potential explanations connected

to inconsistent assumptions of old studies. Various researchers proposed that findings

presented replicas of EFL teaching (Uzun, 2018). It should be perceived that discussing

inferences of this investigation, emphasis must be put on realizing learners’ dialectal

experience. For example, the number of conjunctions in every writing was stated in this study,

as it was revealed inside the realm of this examination.

The Perception of EFL Students on the Use of Cohesive Devices in Expository Writing

Results of semi-structured interviews exhibited that the four EFL teachers have variances and

resemblances in their method of teaching expository writing to their students. They are

extremely alarmed about the progress of their students’ writing and emphasized that their

students encountered many problems in generating coherent text. They connected these

problems to many issues such as inadequate vocabulary, use of simple expressions, and

traditional syllabus that advocate traditional teaching methods for classroom practices. In

addition, they exposed that the lack of consciousness in the growth of new teaching models in

the discipline of Expository writing such as the use of cohesive devices is one of the explanations

that might be related to students’ incompetence to generate cohesive Expository written essays.

In conclusion, the results of the qualitative interview with the four EFL teachers display that

there is a necessity for increasing and improving their students’ writing quality. In addition, they

highlighted that EFL writing teachers, learners, curriculum designers, and planners should have

the necessary knowledge about the importance of new teaching methods. They recommend that

language and translation students should be taught and taught how to implement new

approaches to teaching writing such as lexical cohesion and coherence and these can be

combined into EFL teaching materials.

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DISCUSSION

The quantitative results of current survey show that learners used four different types of

cohesive devices, respectively from the highest to the lowest, which are additives, adversatives,

causal, and temporal in their Expository essays. The sum of conjunctions recorded was 2,383 in

the 30 written essays. It is potential that EFL learners’ discrete use of conjunctions contrasts

meaningfully and may influence the outcomes of research. Forinstance, only one writer used the

device “thus”. Inferences related to misuse of devices can be allied to writing genre and learners’

linguistic awareness. Results showed that many sentences in the written essays did not reflect

high writing quality either due to the redundancy and incorrect use of cohesive devices.

This is because most students’ written essays contain a high percentage of incorrect use of

devices found across the written text. In addition, results reveal that there is an uneven density

of cohesive devices among sentences generated by students. These students were able to

accomplish the standards of Expository texts by discussing the theme of the topics in general.

This is seen in their ability to use different types of cohesive devices. On the other hand, some

students could not illustrate the topic because of their inability to use different types of cohesive

devices among sentences in their written essays. Results, in this regard, show that cohesive

devices are significant to achieving text unity and have a great contribution to the development

of writing quality. Cohesive devices additives, adversatives, causal, and temporal give a

conclusion for the readers and keep the written text interpretable. Further, relevant

pedagogical issues help EFL learners produce cohesive writing which the researcher is cautious

about them. This agrees with the findings of Zhang (2018) and Al Shamalatm & Ghani (2020).

Generally, the result of this study reveals that the presence and absence of cohesive devices

influence the overall unity of written essays. This indicates that a written essay is found unified

and coherent when it involves a greater number of cohesive devices correctly used in the essays.

Therefore, the correct use of adequate cohesive devices inwritten essays determines the unity

and quality of the written text.

CONCLUSION

To conclude, learners’ problems were regarding their unity in the Expository text procedure

mostly as they need proficiency to transform strong and particular key ideas, and subject

structures or not in correct situation, neither in opening clause nor in the ending paragraph.

Furthermore, they varied in implementing suitable change signals in their writing. They

neglected to use precise signifying and punctuation. The investigator commended that learners

should possess ability to make logical passages to link writing, i.e. by composing they should

retain expertise to connect thoughts to viewers. Additionally, learners have to know to connect

structures within a passage by reliably establishing unity. Also, flow of information in passage

ought to be dependable. Thus, to use cohesive markers properly in creating Expository writing,

the learner should know the diverse kinds of cohesive markers. Learners should improve a

better consideration of the use of cohesive markers because they should be aware of the issues

that support attaining the text’s unity. Hence, learners, who did not recover their skill in the use

of devices, showed it stimulating to create high-quality written compositions.

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It can be defined that there is a link between emerging the learners’ text quality. This shows

that learners with low skills in implementing cohesive markers should also improve their skills

since this relates to their text’s quality. Hence, the instructor should highlight emerging learners’

use of cohesive markers before teaching them how to compose by choosing the appropriate

teaching methods.

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